That was amazing... It was super random, but you really managed to pull it off. I really enjoyed it, great humor.
Not bad if this was your first time. The story didn't really make sense to me. It doesn't look like a lot of time was spent on it.
The animation and art itself can be improved by using more tools flash has to offer, I noticed that you used the brush tool a lot. You don't have to be a good artist to have good art, I use a mouse too and if you combine the tools flash gives you, you could create almost anything and it will look good (don't look at my animation its a poor example of it).
All I can say is keep practicing and try to spend as much time as possible on every scene, even the small details make a difference. Make an effort to bring the artwork to life, for instance the blink of an eye or shadows, things that you see in real life.
Here's a link to newgrounds tutorials, check through them if you haven't already:
Google is also useful for tutorials even though it can be time consuming and tedious sometimes to find what you want.
Hope I helped a bit, you have potential, nice song choice, best advice I can give is just keep animating!
I like it very well done. Just try to add a preloader cuz you have people with slow internet and it sucks when you have to watch it with lag. I don't know if it's only my pc though?
Great tutorial, will definitely be using this for my animations. You're awesome!
newgrounds.com — Your #1 online entertainment & artist community! All your base are belong to us.